Below is the prompt for this week. I really like it and does beg the question of how did the car and up here. In my opinion, it went backwards but it could have come from the other side as well!
Enjoy writing and remember to think about your punctuation!
One day a girl was on a beautiful beach until … there was a shark everyone was shouting and screaming for the life guard but he was not there to save them but then a amazing super hero come’s and his name was flash he save everybody in a blink of an eye he could but he could not defeat the shark be him self … wounder woman then BANG BANG the shark was dead .
In hawaii , Amy and Joe , who were siblings , decided to go to the beach which was behind their hotel . It was an ordinary day , soon after they realised that something wasn’t right ; there was nobody there … They wandered around for a few minutes until they heard a light voice behind them . There was nobody there but they could see mysterious figures of different colours . As Amy and Joe approached them they started shuffling around . They have never seen something like this in their whole entire life !
There was a bottle with blue liquid in it . “I’m really thirsty ” said Joe
i was once playing eye spy and saw something gold i said pull over a minute so i could see the gold thing it was so shiny i could barely see it clearly i put on some safety glasses on and it helped a little bit but we entered cautiously it gleamed extremely bright we screamed and ran back to the car and drove off we played eye spy again until we got to the water park so we played in the water park and we saw the shiny thing AGAIN we ran towards it and it was a chest full of treasure we put it in our boot and…
i was walking down the beach side where everyone says buried treasure is there underground. they say if u dig and dig you find human bones when anyone goes down they never get back up because someone puts sinking sand down there and they get stuck so we didn’t go down but we heard some screaming in the distance we ran to see if they needed help but they didn’t need help they needed to find their parents they were lost on the beach side so we helped them find their parents until we found them in their car they started to drive off without them we lost them until…
Today was the most mysterious day of my life…
I was on holiday, swimming in the pool whilst playing polo with my sister and brother. On a poster it read out “archery class tonight at 8:00pm. Please (if you can) come tonight. Thank you.”
We went back to the hotel room, got showered and replaced our clothes with elegant, fresh ones.
After that, we went back to the pool ready for the archery class.
A few minutes later – when everyone arrived – the man announced “sorry for the short notice but we have cancelled archery; instead we are playing chess.”
After an hour, we saw the chess it was humongous…
As i look i imagined them dashing to me like i was a ball in a game of football.
They were LARGE so big that i could go to space but they were moving and coming close as close as i would like.
Then “POW” they fell one by one like a game of dominoes.
My Body shuck in fear as they fell as close to me as i could handle then came my soul rushing out of my body.
As i took the last breath and fell as they plunged onto my that caused me to be in a coma.
Hello everyone,
I hope that you are all well. Below is the prompt for this week. Good luck and enjoy!
My initial thoughts were an army invasion full of suspense but it could also be a giant board game – your creativity is your only limitation!
REMEMBER – check your punctuation and try to include recent learning!
one day, me and nick were working in the mines and all i heard was rocks rumbling i thought this was safe at the start but now i think its not safe at all i asked nick is it safe down here .Nick said of course it is safe but soon after a bunch of rocks fell on nick i tryed to get them all of but some of them were too heavy for me to lift of nick i ran up and got help of someone we helped nick out and snipe barked as loud as a lion we had our lunch and sat down and talked about the…
one day me and nick were just working in the mines with snipe then the tunnels started to shake so we just carried on working then they kept shaking so we got out the mines for lunch then we went back in the mines then it started again I said are you sure its safe Nick said yea then we went for tea then we finshed the day and the next day we went in then it clapesed I fell then nick cought nick said Im holding on to you the he pulled me up with all his strength and we ran out.
