FOREST SCHOOL…
When we were at forest school we were using a pully and we were trying to pull a log up a hill , we pulled and we pulled then we realised it was heavier than I expected .We kept pulling when finally we got it up the hill . I was going down the hill for them to pull me up and when I was walking down the hill I slipped right down it, my mind was on what people were thinking about me so I went down then the whistle went of for us to go back to camp so I headed down to the fire
very accurate description of what happened
That was a very good story about what happened neave
This is a great retell of this wonderful story.
Brilliant piece of work.
Great storyline.
Lots of action.
Well done Neave!!!!
I love your description and the use of describeing your team work trying to get the log up to the top of the hill.WELL DONE>