The purple Elephant
The purple Elephant which painted a happy violin on his wall . The thing the elephant has always asked for was a plain book of card . Christmas came around so he feel a sleep at six on Christmas eve . The next morning he went to go open his gifts . The elephant was going through his gifts he got a paint tray .The elephant was hoping for a plain book of card to paint on . He opened his last gift and got a plain book of card at last . He danced around and said yes . Now he has a happy life .
Well done Dixie! That is a great storyline to go by. I like the part when the elephant fell asleep at 6 just to see whether he will get the card on Christmas. The only the I would change is your spelling of fell-you’ve put feel-and add in the missing speech punctuation for the bottom line.
Keep up the good work!!!! 🙂
Hi Dixie the first thing I spotted was that you’ve put feel asleep not fell asleep