Dear Diary,
It was Halloween night and I needed to go to the shop and buy a pumpkin and we got a pumpkin carving set witch helped a lot because the pumpkin is hard to cut into. You always need to be careful with knives because you could really damage your self! There were lots of pumpkins around the shop. In the corner of my eye, I saw a pumpkin mouth move and I thought to myself the orange one spoke first . I thought I was going crazy at that point a pumpkin spoke it was like a movie that you watch at the cinema .
your writing is amazing I can see you have worked hard on this but you need to change witch to which also change a pumpkin to the pumpkin. I would love to see more of your writing.
MaddyG
thank you your work is spectacular as well