Tom 100wc Week 4

Posted on 4th October 2019 by TomW

The birds were flying above are heads ; there was one raven black bird who just couldn’t
fly ; that bird just wouldn’t give up.It kept trying 1,2,3,4,5 times it tried one very kind-hearted bird came to help, we all wached in happiness as the bird’s tried to help each other

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2 Responses to Tom 100wc Week 4

  1. EmiliaA says:
    4th October 2019 at 4:16 pm

    Positive- Great description phrases
    Negative- Write a little more

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  2. LibbyB1 says:
    7th October 2019 at 5:44 pm

    Good but you need to write a bit more.

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