“Will, your eyes will go square if you sit too close to the TV,” called Mum from the kitchen.
Engrossed Will carried on looking at the TV. “I want to be an astronaut.”
10 years later, Will became an astronaut but there was only one problem. They were about to take off when it just wouldn’t take off! The greatest space mission was over however they had one last thing too do. “Will, can you fix the space ship?” The greatest space mission is on. “Thanks Will, we can do the greatest space mission.” Off they go. 5 4 3 2 1 blast off. Will saved the day.
Positive- Great vocabulary
Negative- Try to remember commas
Good vocabulary
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