JACK 100wc week8

”AAAAGGGHHHH!” screamed Peppa.  ”  The brown balloon kicked me!”

George ran through into the living room to see his big sister crying on the floor surrounded by brown balloons looming over her like a gang. This has not happened before , it’s slightly frightening actually he thought to him self . what is happening . Mum and dad [ their name is actually mum and dad from birth] walked in to see their 16 year old daughter lying crying on the floor surrounded by balloons and her 3 year brother writing a full blown report on it in perfect handwriting on the situation. Then going to make a cup of tea.

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2 Responses to JACK 100wc week8

  1. KaidenM says:

    Good story Jack, I like it how it made me laugh

  2. Mrs P (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Jack
    Your 100WC gripped me from the very beginning. You have used the words in such a natural way I had to check what the prompt words were! Well done.

    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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