Emilia Week #8 100wc

My birthday balloon is finally here. It came in the post this morning. We are opening the package on the scarlet coloured, leather  sofa [it is really, really comfortable]. When we ripped open the package we realised it was a brown balloon, not a pearlescent white. I was so angry with the colour of the balloon that I kicked the sofa and screamed so loud that it felt like the cosy cottage shook. My mum says, trying to reassure me “It’s ok, we’ll order another one!”. My mum said that it was frightening that this has happened this one important time [this has never happened before].

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100wc Week #8 Prompt

Here is the link to the 100wc this week.

Try to include some apostrophes and speech punctuation.

https://100wc.net/week-820/#more-23381

Enjoy and good luck!

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100wc week#6 Neave

FOREST SCHOOL…

When we were at forest school we were using a pully and we were trying to pull a log up a hill , we pulled and we pulled then we realised it was heavier than I expected .We kept pulling when finally we got it up the hill .  I was going down the hill for them to pull me up and when I was  walking down the hill I slipped right down it, my mind was on what people were thinking about me so I went down then the whistle went of for us to go back to camp so I headed down to the fire

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Emilia 100wc Week 6

I was in the airport car park getting the medium-size suitcase when I realised that it was heavier than I expected… It felt like it was 100kg (or at least something like that). Luckily, I finally managed to lift it out of the car and was walking to the bus stop to catch the bus to the terminal when I noticed that I left the other bags. This means that I was to focused on trying to carry the heavy suitcase that I forgot about the rest of my things. My holiday to the airport was finally complete (at least half of the way there).

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fishing and motorbiking

My name is bobby  I like fishing and motorbiking when I go fishing and the fish it

was  heavier than expected  and I went on my motorbiking

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Charllie100wc

Dear Diary

Today me and my family were moving house! The removal van had just arrived and we had started moving the sofa out the door it was almost impossible we only just got there . Next we had to move my bed first we took it to pieces and all took a part each , it was heavier then I expected but I still managed it and pushed it into the removal van. At the new house we decided who’s bedroom was who’s and were everything was going to be. It had a huge garden and two bathrooms it was great!

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Lilly 100WC

THE DAY I HELPED BE  MCANIC

As I was about to take some tools away I was asked to take the wheel of a car it was my time to shine as I was taking the bolts  out it dropped luckily I caught it . It  was heavier than I expected a new disc was needed so my second job was to help dad put it on the bolts started rolling down the drive way and they nearly went down the drain so I jump and caught them I was lucky  they never went down I was just about to put the tire back on the car and I got a fright a big black cat ran by and shocked me …

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violet 100wc

it was heavier than I expected … “can you come and help,” called Sarah” the box is heavy “Sarah is right how are we going to lift the box it is heavy but I didn’t want to show it with all my might I pulled the box,”heave,” up lifted the box onto the bed” it needs to go down stairs. why is moving house so hard.” Down stairs the removal people where carrying the boxes and making it look so easy George was in the kitchen emptying the boxes to the cupboard “when will this be over.” moaned Lilly “moving house is so hard.”

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Zack 100 Word Challenge

It was heavier than I expected, just staring at the cinema screen. Jesse was right. It was sad. As I left the cinema, I saw a door standing in the middle of the path. I dashed into it (leaving Jesse behind).Inside was a world I could never imagine.There were lights and castles everywhere. Along with that, middle-aged men and women roamed round the beautiful scenery. Everyone was very greeting. The one strange thing that I never understood was that they all wore the same clothes and glasses. This was the strangest place ever.I walked out the door with a confused look

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100wc Week #6

Below is a link to the 100wc this week. Let’s see if we can improve our peer assessment and make our writing the best it can be.

REMEMBER – we have been looking at possessive apostrophes and subordinate clauses amongst other things recently. Why not put some of these in your writing?

Enjoy!

https://100wc.net/

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