The Ghost Of Christmas Night
It was the night before Christmas when I was watching a movie. Reindeers.I never knew they could fly. I fell asleep after five minutes it was so boring.It didn’t make any sense and it was confusing. All of a sudden, I heard a crash, a bang and a scream.I ran downstairs looking at a cloudy-eyed phantom staring at me and a destroyed house.Running to the car, the house became crouded with black clouds crushing it. It came coming and the car broke down. I ran and it kept coming until I woke from my dream
Hi Zack
I like how you have you have put it was the night before Christmas and a hyphenated word but you could maybe have the 2nd sentence a bit longer .