100WC week8tom

There was a girl who was going up into the sky her name was Bella. She got into the ancient batted, brown balloon she was scared . As the balloon started going up up up the sunset was phenomenal I was still a little bit nervous but I was most excited .We’reĀ  about 98 feet in the sky we kept going further and further up now I wasn’t scared in fact I was loving it we were very high in the sky as we landed I said thank you ; got into the car we drove home talking about the fantastic day.

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3 Responses to 100WC week8tom

  1. NeaveT says:

    you need to put the words in but other than that it has good vocabulary .

  2. LibbyB1 says:

    A very good story and vocabulary .

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